Last
year when I ran the Air Force Marathon, I trained during the July heat to the
point of injury and like a dummy, I ran through the pain. I made it through the
race then had to take several months off to heal. When I crossed the finish
line that day, instead of rejoicing, the moment seemed anticlimactic. To me, my
victory was surviving the training, not completing the race. I said to my daughter
who was waiting at the line, “What next?”
That
was the feeling I had yesterday when I finished The Last MacKlenna. (When I say finished, I mean subject to beta
readers’ notes and a final line edit.)
But the moment was anticlimactic.
It
has taken 2 ½ years to write this story. The heroine, as I’ve mentioned before,
has breast cancer. My three sisters-in-law all battled the disease while I was
writing. We lost Sally last October after a twelve-year battle, and then my mom
passed away on June 30. Mom didn’t have breast cancer, but she did have
dementia and didn’t know me. As she declined mentally and physically, the story
developed. Although she did hear me talk about the plot, she never got to read
any of the pages.
Finishing
the story—anticlimactic? Living through the trauma while writing the story was
the victory.
In
a way, now, the real work begins. It’s almost time to take the creation and
present it to the world and pray that it touches someone’s heart or motivates
them to make life-style changes. Elliott and Meredith live extremely stressful
lives and their priorites are out of whack. Their journey takes them on an even
more stressful track in this romantic suspense (murdered multi-million dollar
Thoroughbreds and the launch of a new wine with constant set-backs).
Here’s
a snippet from the second chapter. Elliott is at a B&B in Edinburgh talking
with his long-time friend, Louise.
“I
wish you’d find someone you could be happy with for longer than six weeks. Yer
not a young man now.”
“That’s
your second reference to my age, and I’ve only been here—” he glanced at the
clock on the chimneypiece — “fifteen minutes.”
“I
worry about ye’, especially now that the MacKlennas and your da are gone. I
don’t want you growing old alone.”
Elliott
sipped the whiskey. The liquid slid down his throat, warming him like a
twill-weave plaid of fire. “I’ve got close to a hundred people on the farm. I’m
never alone.”
“There’s
a difference between being alone and lonely. And those people on the farm go
back to their safe, wee houses at the end of the day—to their families.” She
cocked her head and studied him with troubled eyes. “Who’s at MacKlenna Mansion
waiting for ye’?”
He
gave a tight shrug or was it a flinch? “Tate and Tabor.”
She
set her glass down, folded her arms across her chest, and seemed to settle them
comfortably beneath her large breasts. “They’re wonderful pets. Very devoted.
But I’m talking about a companion you can have a conversation with, not a
golden retriever or a long-haired, tabby Maine Coon cat.”
Her
concerned gaze spilled over him, and he glanced away.
“Sean
married a lass who understood the farm and its demands. So can you.”
“He
was a young lad when he met Mary,” Elliott said.
“You
need to be open to love. I’m not sure you are. You’re too strong-willed and
private. Ye’ rarely let anyone see yer sensitive side.”
“Shush.”
She
pointed her finger at him. “You can shush yer mates, but don’t ye’ dare shush
me.”
That’s
pretty much Elliott’s solution to talking about anything personal. “Shush.”
I
sent a Facebook message to a woman who had read The Ruby Brooch and the teaser chapter of The Last MacKlenna. As a result of reading that chapter, she had a
mammogram, and subsequently, a mastectomy. When I asked her if she’d like to be
a beta reader, she said, “Absolutely interested in being a beta reader. Cannot
wait! After all, that book saved my life. Congratulations on finishing it. You
are my hero.”
If
that was the reason this story needed to be told, then it’s accomplished its
goal.
They
say if a writer cries while writing, the reader cries while reading. If that’s
the case, readers will need a box of tissues. The story is not for everyone,
and I’m sure there will be a few less than stellar reviews. But heck, I
finished the manuscript and overcame my fear that I’d never complete it. That
garners a five-star in my book.
Don’t
ever quit on a goal. Don’t ever stop believing in your dreams.
~*~
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