By:
Janine Savage (Write Divas)
Ah…
the mystery of scene breaks and what to do with them. It’s such a little thing,
and yet its impact on the flow and pace of a story is important. Scene
breaks are a lot like commas: everyone needs them but the rules of use can be
vague.
So
what’s a writer to do? Glad you asked. First let’s address what scene breaks
are used for. Most authors use them to indicate one or several of the following
when a new chapter is not needed.
Shift
in point of view
If
your story is not told from a single point of view, the scene break can be used
to indicate a change of the point of view character. There are a few guidelines
when changing point of view. First, let your reader know early who the new
point of view character is. Don’t leave them guessing or they will stop and
reread to figure out what they missed, thus pulling them out of the story.
Second, avoid changing POV within a scene. Third, avoid repeating the same
scene from another point of view. Fourth, never change POV in
the middle of a paragraph. This is particularly hard for authors writing in
third person. For a more detailed article about point of view shifts, check out
Jen Matera’s article “Writing Pitfall #5: Head Hopping.”
Change
in setting
.
. .
Read the full article HERE!
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