By:
Glenn Mori
I
am chagrined when I critique someone’s writing and point out a lack of tension
and emotion (the grit under interactions, the differences in perspectives, the
micro-tension on the small scale, crisis and conflicts on the larger scale, and
ask ‘where’s the anxiety, worry, irritation, miscommunication ?’), then discover
the same failing in my own fiction.
The
source of the problem (for me at least; I’m not sure about my writing partners )
is usually multifaceted.
Writing
from plot .
I don’t always write from plot , but when I do, I can be in a hurry to move up
the story ladder. Quantity of description falls, line-by-line writing quality
drops, characters become inconsistent or cardboard or boring. I’m not putting
myself in my character’s skin to look around and experience their world.
I’ve failed to
communicate what I intended. When I proofread my writing, I
read between the lines and don’t realize it. Instead of seeing
what’s written, I re-experience what I was thinking when I wrote it. This kind
of writing is useful only if no one else reads it; a diary, for example, or a
personal blog.
These
problems can occur simultaneously. I might design characters around a plot and
believe that I’m ready to write, but in reality I have flimsy character
sketches zap-strapped to my plot skeleton and I don’t see weaknesses because I
sense more in my words than I’ve actually written. I suspect this happens often
with beginning writers who try to patch it with “interesting traits” or
“examples of conflict” from a website to fill the story out.
Also…
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If
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- Authors and Internet Marketing + Links — The Book Designer http://t.co/VkBca48LIJ
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